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Tous Ensemble, En Chemin Avec Jesus


LO: To edit a time-slip story to the past


Unit: Time Slips



Re-read your story for pleasure at least twice.


As you read, ask yourself:

  • Can I add anything to that sentence / section?
  • Did that paragraph flow well?
  • How can I improve my story?
  • Do all of my sentences make sense?
  • Are there any missing words?
  • Have I used correct punctuation?


Can you add any extra:

  • Subordinate clauses
  • Relative clauses
  • Interesting openers
  • Conjunctions
  • Adventurous vocabulary
  • Adjectives
  • Adverbs
  • Range of punctuation – brackets. Dashes, colons, semi-colons, etc.


Edit and improve your story.


Focus on using punctuation 100% accurately.


Send your edited story (final version) to us. 

Please ensure that your story is handwritten neatly or typed neatly as this is your final version (no longer a draft).