Tous Ensemble, En Chemin Avec Jesus
English
LO: To edit a time-slip story to the past
Unit: Time Slips
Task:
Re-read your story for pleasure at least twice.
As you read, ask yourself:
- Can I add anything to that sentence / section?
- Did that paragraph flow well?
- How can I improve my story?
- Do all of my sentences make sense?
- Are there any missing words?
- Have I used correct punctuation?
Can you add any extra:
- Subordinate clauses
- Relative clauses
- Interesting openers
- Conjunctions
- Adventurous vocabulary
- Adjectives
- Adverbs
- Range of punctuation – brackets. Dashes, colons, semi-colons, etc.
Edit and improve your story.
Focus on using punctuation 100% accurately.
Send your edited story (final version) to us.
Please ensure that your story is handwritten neatly or typed neatly as this is your final version (no longer a draft).