Tous Ensemble, En Chemin Avec Jesus
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LO: To edit a detailed character description.
Read your character description for pleasure at least twice.
As you read, ask yourself:
- Can I add anything to that sentence / section?
- Did that paragraph flow well?
- How can I improve my description?
- Do all of my sentences make sense?
- Are there any missing words?
- Have I used correct punctuation?
Can you add any extra:
- Subordinate clauses
- Relative clauses
- Interesting openers
- Conjunctions
- Adventurous vocabulary
- Adjectives
- Adverbs
- Range of punctuation – brackets. Dashes, colons, semi-colons, etc.
Edit and improve your character description.
Focus on using punctuation
100% accurately.
Send your edited character description (presented neatly) to us.