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Tous Ensemble, En Chemin Avec Jesus


LO: To up-level sentences from Tom’s Midnight Garden.


Look at the series of sentences (pdf document below) taken from Chapters 7 and 8.


Up-level the sentences to make them more complex and interesting to the reader.

Remember to look closely at the context of the sentence – they should link to the storyline of the book.


You could add, for example:

  • Subordinate clauses
  • Relative clauses
  • Interesting openers
  • Conjunctions
  • Adventurous vocabulary
  • Adjectives
  • Adverbs
  • Range of punctuation – brackets. Dashes, colons, semi-colons, etc.